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Fabulous Fun

Sunshine is fun time. We start the car, go far. First stop beach shop. I scream for ice cream. Itsy bitsy teenie weenie yellow polka dot bikini. Jump in for a swim. Beach ball, we all fall. Skin save as we sun bathe Sun set, all get in car. Back home, good roam. Night night, sleep tight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/14/2017 6:37:00 PM
FOOTLES! Nice win, Jean, and a charming write - congrats, my friend! :-)
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Jean Murray
Date: 9/14/2017 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Greg. I had fun with this.
Date: 4/1/2017 8:54:00 AM
Hi Jean, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/1/2017 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 3/31/2017 6:18:00 PM
Loved your fun trip to the beach in footle form Jean:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/1/2017 1:14:00 AM
Thank you Jan.
Date: 3/24/2017 8:16:00 PM
nicely done, jean!
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/25/2017 5:16:00 AM
Morning Ilene. We had a lovely sunny day here yesterday. It was inspiring.
Date: 3/24/2017 2:25:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, this is a great footle.
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Date: 3/24/2017 3:19:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth. It certainly was fun making it.
Date: 3/24/2017 2:00:00 PM
- Well done, Jean :) - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend, enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2017 3:16:00 PM
So far so good Sunshine. We had some lovely sunshine here today.
Date: 3/24/2017 1:51:00 PM
A wonderful minute of travel! I'll take some of those jelly beans (virtually ;)
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Date: 3/24/2017 3:15:00 PM
Ok Kim...here they come.....Open wide.....
Date: 3/24/2017 1:14:00 PM
New day...We play...Sneak wine...divine
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/24/2017 3:14:00 PM
Did someone mention wine? Mon Dieu! It's after nine. Why is there not a glass in my hand?

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