Fabulous Fun

Sunshine is fun time.
We start the car, go far.

First stop beach shop.
I scream for ice cream.

Itsy bitsy teenie weenie
yellow polka dot bikini.

Jump in for a swim.
Beach ball, we all fall.

Skin save as we sun bathe
Sun set, all get in car.

Back home, good roam.
Night night, sleep tight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 6:37 PM
FOOTLES! Nice win, Jean, and a charming write - congrats, my friend! :-)
Murray Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Thank you Greg. I had fun with this.
Y. Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Hi Jean, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Murray Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Allison Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Loved your fun trip to the beach in footle form Jean:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Murray Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 1:14 AM
Thank you Jan.
Bauer Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 8:16 PM
nicely done, jean!
Murray Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 5:16 AM
Morning Ilene. We had a lovely sunny day here yesterday. It was inspiring.
Kinch  Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 2:25 PM
Good luck in the contest, this is a great footle.
Murray Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Elizabeth. It certainly was fun making it.
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 2:00 PM
- Well done, Jean :) - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend, enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 3:16 PM
So far so good Sunshine. We had some lovely sunshine here today.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 1:51 PM
A wonderful minute of travel! I'll take some of those jelly beans (virtually ;)
Murray Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Ok Kim...here they come.....Open wide.....
Smith Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 1:14 PM
New day...We play...Sneak wine...divine
Murray Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Did someone mention wine? Mon Dieu! It's after nine. Why is there not a glass in my hand?
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