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Fabric Silk

Silk, fine lustrous fabric 
a rapturous vow path 
Elegant romantic wedding
gowns; woven tulle waltz pose
rhinestone whirled in eddies
do the wed till eternity

11/8/2017

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Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2017 at 3:10 PM

REreading this one, the eddies line really stood out for me. It was a lovely image. Congrats in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

November 15, 2017 at 12:01 PM

Silk, compliments of a tiny creature whose appearance might be disdainful to some, created such beauty that silk was in hightest regard by emperors and kings! You chose well Eve. I loved your creative entry! Congratulations on your placement! : )

James Inman

November 14, 2017 at 7:20 AM

I think perhaps the most important piece of fabric in a woman's life, the piece from which her wedding gown is made. Nice write Eve.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

November 14, 2017 at 12:49 AM

Congratulations, Eve on your win.

Nette Onclaud

November 13, 2017 at 10:33 AM

resplendent work from your silken pen, eve... a round of congrats on your fine win and thanks for supporting this challenge...

Janice Canerdy

November 11, 2017 at 11:13 AM

Very descriptive, Eve. Janice

Anisha Dutta

November 10, 2017 at 8:54 AM

i always love your composition. Too good to read. Hugs

John Michaels

November 10, 2017 at 4:59 AM

Lovely imagery and personification, Eve. Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.

Arthur Vaso

November 10, 2017 at 1:31 AM

I enjoyed this poem Silk!!! Hugs!!

Andrea Dietrich

November 9, 2017 at 8:20 PM

oh yes, that last line. It's so pretty with that kind of design!! You chose one of the best fabrics ever.

Paul Callus

November 9, 2017 at 3:40 PM

You women know how to choose your fabrics, Eve, and looks like silk is one of your favourites! Hugs // paul

Silent One

November 9, 2017 at 8:52 AM

This is lovely Eve...

Vijay Pandit

November 9, 2017 at 7:17 AM

Lovely fabric in this poem of silky words--best for a win, Eve!

Heidi Sands

November 9, 2017 at 6:16 AM

This is beautiful Eve! :)

Russell Sivey

November 9, 2017 at 4:20 AM

Wow, what a glorious write, so full of a delight that I felt the clothing on...well sort of as I wouldn't wear women's clothing per se (Don't ask Emma about that, it's embarrassing)! What a brilliant piece, with all the rhinestones on and everything! Great Work!!