Fabric

Fabric Fabric interwoven, life’s blended tapestry bleeding rainbowed variations, blossoming faded threads renewed. John G. Lawless Threads of Syllables contest//5/13/2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/9/2014 3:57:00 PM

Short listed words but enchantingly creative a blast of poetry :) CONGRATULATIONS :) olive eloisa here..I " blossoming faded thread..." I understand this as aged grows the more beautiful it becomes...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2014 11:21:00 PM

this is a really good one that I would expect higher on the list. Congrats for your win. It's a beautiful little poem

John Lawless
Date: 4/25/2014 8:23:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for your uplifting remarks. Glad you liked it.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/24/2014 4:16:00 AM

Very well said in just few words...well thats a real art of poetry,, great poem John,,congrats!

John Lawless
Date: 4/25/2014 8:24:00 PM

Thank you. It is always interesting where these contest prompt lead.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/23/2014 10:45:00 PM

Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, john

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/23/2014 12:10:00 PM

accepted as aquarian based on my typo glitch.. well spun, john.. sweet congrats on your win in my contest.. huggs

John Lawless
Date: 4/25/2014 8:28:00 PM

Nette, I shied away from poetic forms, new and old, for some time however these contest prompts and the interaction within the poetry soup community have invited me to play again. thanks for all the time you dedicate to the contest.

Kate Hanigan

Date: 4/16/2014 6:25:00 PM

We'll... I believe telling someone, so as your self, if what they like sucks dick then it builds them stronger. Go suck someone's dick ugly ass hoe!

John Lawless
Date: 4/16/2014 6:29:00 PM

interesting comment although I fail to see how it relates to the poem or to anything else for that matter.