Fabric

Fabric


Fabric
interwoven,
life’s blended tapestry
bleeding

rainbowed
variations,
blossoming faded threads
renewed.


John G. Lawless
Threads of Syllables contest//5/13/2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

May 9, 2014 at 3:57 PM

Short listed words but enchantingly creative a blast of poetry :) CONGRATULATIONS :) olive eloisa here..I " blossoming faded thread..." I understand this as aged grows the more beautiful it becomes...

Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2014 at 11:21 PM

this is a really good one that I would expect higher on the list. Congrats for your win. It's a beautiful little poem

John Lawless

April 25, 2014 at 8:23 PM

Andrea, thanks for your uplifting remarks. Glad you liked it.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 24, 2014 at 4:16 AM

Very well said in just few words...well thats a real art of poetry,, great poem John,,congrats!

John Lawless

April 25, 2014 at 8:24 PM

Thank you. It is always interesting where these contest prompt lead.

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 23, 2014 at 10:45 PM

Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, john

Nette Onclaud

April 23, 2014 at 12:10 PM

accepted as aquarian based on my typo glitch.. well spun, john.. sweet congrats on your win in my contest.. huggs

John Lawless

April 25, 2014 at 8:28 PM

Nette, I shied away from poetic forms, new and old, for some time however these contest prompts and the interaction within the poetry soup community have invited me to play again. thanks for all the time you dedicate to the contest.