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Faallliiinnng In Love

my eyes gt tangled whn i saw u frst tym.. lyk my thoughts r spinin lyk a circle upside... dt vaccum has been filled by ur essence in my account... faaallliing in love makes me blind by my own sole amount... i nevr gv up hope on u... v nevr hv talked in any issue.. bt still i have dt dream of stallion prince.. faaaliinng in love hs make u mine dt since.. like a lady i gt up n strt our frst love song note... dt u dnt knw whr im stuck..in my mind i thought... u hv capturd me and hv takn me outside dt cage.. faaalliinnnggg in love wid smone dts al its take... nt nly my heart..my sole has begun 2 like u.. dn suddenly u cm up wid a plan 2 lft ds here althrough.. i ws broken and dt sound ws still struglin in my mind.. faaaaallliinng in love wid u hs make me once pride.. d hardst part z to stand up again.. n face d world lyk i hv done same.. still wnderin wht d thin u hv strtd to blame.. nw also i could nt able to stop dt rain.. becoz faalliinng in love wid u cn nevr be tamed.... love pari if u liked d poem or evn if u hate it..plz gv me ur feedback through ur cmnts..i wl apreciate it..

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Date: 10/23/2013 11:26:00 AM
PS. CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/23/2013 3:25:00 PM
thnx skat :) :)
Date: 10/23/2013 7:49:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Parivartna,
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/23/2013 3:25:00 PM
thnx sir :) :)
Date: 10/22/2013 9:55:00 PM
enjoying your win...PD
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/23/2013 3:24:00 PM
thnx linda :) :)
Date: 7/7/2013 10:34:00 AM
A great poem of lost emotions, .. ;-) Congratulations-in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. Take Care * Linda
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/12/2013 2:27:00 PM
thnx linda :) :)
Date: 7/2/2013 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations. This entry was good enough to win. That speaks volumes about the poet.... Jake
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/12/2013 2:27:00 PM
oh thnx john :) :)
Date: 7/1/2013 9:42:00 PM
P, a great winning poem, in Nathan's (dark, lost, broken emotions) contest. :-) SKAT
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/12/2013 2:26:00 PM
thnx a lot dear :) :)
Date: 7/1/2013 9:20:00 PM
congrats ' NATE
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 10/12/2013 2:25:00 PM
thnx a lot :) :)
Date: 6/21/2013 2:43:00 AM
And i lyk dis one 2
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 6/21/2013 4:05:00 AM
haha..thnx yr :) :)
Date: 6/6/2013 9:56:00 PM
Hello Pari, your poem was not chosen as a winning poem in my contest... however I gave you an HM, in hopes other poets will take their time to read your poem... xox~ Linda
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 6/6/2013 11:02:00 PM
Thats k linda...i just wnt an exposure ovr here...thnx for givin it HM ...:) :)

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