Faallliiinnng In Love

my eyes gt tangled whn i saw u frst tym..
lyk my thoughts r spinin lyk a circle upside...
dt vaccum has been filled by ur essence in my account...
faaallliing in love makes me blind by my own sole amount...
 
i nevr gv up hope on u...
v nevr hv talked in any issue..
bt still i have dt dream of stallion prince..
faaaliinng in love hs make u mine dt since..
 
like a lady i gt up n strt our frst love song note...
dt u dnt knw whr im stuck..in my mind i thought...
u hv capturd me and hv takn me outside dt cage..
faaalliinnnggg in love wid smone dts al its take...
 
nt nly my heart..my sole has begun 2 like u..
dn suddenly u cm up wid a plan 2 lft ds here althrough..
i ws broken and dt sound ws still struglin in my mind..
faaaaallliinng in love wid u hs make me once pride..
 
d hardst part z to stand up again..
n face d world lyk i hv done same..
still wnderin wht d thin u hv strtd to blame..
nw also i could nt able to stop dt rain..
becoz faalliinng in love wid u cn nevr be tamed....
 
 
love pari

if u liked d poem or evn if u hate it..plz gv me ur feedback through ur cmnts..i wl apreciate it..
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A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:26 AM
PS. CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
Singh Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 3:25 PM
thnx skat :) :)
Mehta Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Parivartna,
Singh Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 3:25 PM
thnx sir :) :)
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 9:55 PM
enjoying your win...PD
Singh Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 3:24 PM
thnx linda :) :)
A   Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 10:34 AM
A great poem of lost emotions, .. ;-) Congratulations-in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. Take Care * Linda
Singh Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 2:27 PM
thnx linda :) :)
Posey Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 5:36 PM
Congratulations. This entry was good enough to win. That speaks volumes about the poet.... Jake
Singh Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 2:27 PM
oh thnx john :) :)
A  Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 9:42 PM
P, a great winning poem, in Nathan's (dark, lost, broken emotions) contest. :-) SKAT
Singh Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 2:26 PM
thnx a lot dear :) :)
D. Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 9:20 PM
congrats ' NATE
Singh Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 2:25 PM
thnx a lot :) :)
Iqbal Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 2:43 AM
And i lyk dis one 2
Singh Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 4:05 AM
haha..thnx yr :) :)
A   Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 9:56 PM
Hello Pari, your poem was not chosen as a winning poem in my contest... however I gave you an HM, in hopes other poets will take their time to read your poem... xox~ Linda
Singh Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 11:02 PM
Thats k linda...i just wnt an exposure ovr here...thnx for givin it HM ...:) :)
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