Eyes Wide Open

I walked on past you
Never stopped to see
Those painful eyes
Looking up at me

Never saw the bodies
Huddled in the rain
Never saw my brothers
Crying in pain

I'm Held deep in silence,
Day after day 
The sun shines bright
until the clouds fade to grey

Tear drops they fall, 
Fall down like rain
Flooding these streets
Full of shame
full of shame

Now my eyes are wide open
I see what I see
All the pain that's caused 
Is Caused by you and me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 9:50 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Adam. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 3:34 PM
sad poem--well done!
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Great write that I enjoyed reading ..Sara
A   Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 11:53 AM
the things unseen till you open your eyes, a deep, enjoyed this one...P.D.
Roberts Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 11:36 AM
wonderful poem, much enjoyed
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