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Eyes Wide Open

Organ of vision, Spherical...moist observers; A beautiful pair. ___________________________ Inspired by Sami Al-khalili's Pen to Face, Face to Pen Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/1/2009 8:57:00 AM
mystical..."moist observers" can reveal so much! Jim
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:22:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, this is a great poem describing your eyes.
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Date: 4/19/2009 1:12:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Raul.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/18/2009 3:33:00 PM
Interesting view Raul
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Date: 4/18/2009 1:35:00 PM
well penned,great entry-charma
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:05:00 PM
Very clever piece, I like the clarity.
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Date: 4/18/2009 7:10:00 AM
Much said in just three lines. Very creative. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/18/2009 6:28:00 AM
So different! Love it. Good luck Raul! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/18/2009 3:10:00 AM
a lovely entry, Raul! best wishes ... ~ Arany
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:38:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:37:00 PM
Good luck in thios contest, nice way to describe the eyes, a pure sign of genius in your descriptions.
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