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Eyes Wide Open

Organ of vision,
Spherical...moist observers;
A beautiful pair.







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Inspired by Sami Al-khalili's 
Pen to Face, Face to Pen Contest

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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James Marshall Goff

May 1, 2009 at 8:57 AM

mystical..."moist observers" can reveal so much! Jim

April 27, 2009 at 10:22 PM

Good luck in the contest, this is a great poem describing your eyes.

April 19, 2009 at 1:12 AM

Best wishes with this one Raul.Rgds Brian

April 18, 2009 at 3:33 PM

Interesting view Raul

Charmaine Chircop

April 18, 2009 at 1:35 PM

well penned,great entry-charma

April 18, 2009 at 12:05 PM

Very clever piece, I like the clarity.

April 18, 2009 at 7:10 AM

Much said in just three lines. Very creative. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

April 18, 2009 at 6:28 AM

So different! Love it. Good luck Raul! Love, Shar

April 18, 2009 at 3:10 AM

a lovely entry, Raul! best wishes ... ~ Arany

April 18, 2009 at 12:38 AM

Best wishes with this one Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

April 17, 2009 at 11:37 PM

Good luck in thios contest, nice way to describe the eyes, a pure sign of genius in your descriptions.

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