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Eyes Upon

In not caring when I’m broken You become an absent friend, In disdain for words I’ve spoken, No desire to comprehend. In not gleaning when I’m failing You become a distant thing, In unknowing of my ailing, No acknowledged faltering. In not giving when I’m needing You become left far behind, In neglect of my receding No concern and never mind. When night sets down narcosis On the world and all it’s waking, Turn cold eyes upon the night And a heart forever breaking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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