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Eyes Opened

Eyes Blinded, unseeing Scales fall away Rejoicing in new light! Illumination
---------- This would be my first, going with the word count rather than syllables. Trying to learn, eager for constructive criticism...

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Date: 2/17/2022 1:27:00 PM
This sounds like a reason to rejoice
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