Heidi Sands Poet Haiku

Eyes on the sky

Happy Solar Eclipse Day!

Today there will be a total solar eclipse across the country. Enjoy!


           moon will block the light
           as the sun will be hidden
               with eyes on the sky


Heidi Sands

4/8/24

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Darlene De Beaulieu April 9, 2024 at 4:39 PM Hello Heidi, so many people were .lucky to see the eclipse. Ir was not dark enough to see ir for me. Hugs. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu April 10, 2024 at 10:30 AM Hello Heidi, Oh well, I am not the only one that did not see the eclipse. Hugs. /Darlene/ Heidi Sands April 10, 2024 at 6:56 AM Hi Darlene. Yes you are right. I am sorry that you didn't see it fully. Thank you for your visit :)

Mike Gentile April 9, 2024 at 3:59 AM Eyes on the sky, the perfectly timely haiku for the day! Great one Heidi xxoo Heidi Sands April 9, 2024 at 4:57 AM Thank you Mike. It ended up to be a perfect warm, clear day to see it. Happy Tuesday . xxoo :)

Joe Maverick April 8, 2024 at 10:41 PM You have ecclipsed my expectations Heidi..' With this light outlined, offering Heidi.' Heidi Sands April 9, 2024 at 4:55 AM Thank you Joe. It turned out amazing :)

Silent One April 8, 2024 at 8:20 AM Vivid imagery in your haiku... Nicely done. Heidi Sands April 8, 2024 at 10:11 AM Thank you very much, my friend :)

Vijay Pandit April 8, 2024 at 6:00 AM Aptly timed and on mark for the day, my friend. Looking forward to the event, as you are, Heidi. Heidi Sands April 8, 2024 at 6:25 AM Thank you Vijay. I hope you have a fun time :)