Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Eyes On Fish

fisher man
                                                  fishing creel in hands
                                                        stuck with mud 

                                                         crane near by
                                                  jumps here and there
                                                           eyes on fish

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Andrea Dietrich February 16, 2013 at 8:32 PM this is really cute. The man and the crane both waiting on that fish!!

Harry Horsman February 8, 2013 at 4:23 AM amazing picture your haiku creates

Kim Merryman February 6, 2013 at 3:09 PM Enjoyed your haiku, BL! Good work. Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2013 at 2:11 PM BL, i can imagine everyone ready for the perfect catch... good haikus....PD

Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2013 at 1:31 PM Fish eyes ......... watery .... lifeless eyes, nasty ..... lol. - Well done bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)