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Eyes of May

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In her eyes, I saw love eternal a mesmeric maternal with a seismic smile For in her tears I saw life’s pain as she would restrain her turbulent trial In her eyes, I saw a selfless soul as she kept control in her daily mazy mile For within her silent stare a pensive prayer the solitudes of her immobile ~~~ In her eyes, I saw the light of God as I stood and awed at her internal being Amidst her inner thoughts, a mind tied in knots of a heart fluttering fleeing In her eyes, I saw myself a distant dust on a shelf before her final sleeping For in her eyes of May that soon faded away until our next mystic meeting. In honor of the first day of May, this contest is for your best poem from LAST May. So it must be dated, from 5/01 to 5/31 of 2018. Minimum 3 lines, maximum of 14 lines. Any topic except political and religious, please. Originally posted May.11.2018 Contest sponsored by Anthony Slausen In Memory of my Mom~Emma...May.16.1941~Oct.24.2017 May her memory live forever Repost...May.02.2019 Memories of May Poetry Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner N/A for contest

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Date: 5/11/2019 3:00:00 PM
Hello Winged Wqrrior, a lovely poem for your mom. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/8/2019 10:49:00 PM
Beautiful, mesmerizing, intriguing.....'For in her eyes of May that soon faded away until our next mystic meeting'. No doubt about it my friend you are the internal rhyme Master. Love it....Maria Hugs
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Date: 5/6/2019 9:25:00 PM
The words and rhythms are fantastic!
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Date: 5/6/2019 11:53:00 AM
Love this...., Panagiota
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Date: 5/5/2019 7:23:00 AM
So beautifully composed my great friend. A fav...
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Date: 5/3/2019 4:31:00 AM
I like the concept...and the write, the read's a bit mechanical...would have loved to hear you breathe it...All the best WW
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Date: 5/2/2019 8:09:00 PM
wow, the last part is so touching, WW. I really enjoyed LISTENING to this. You have kind of dialect different from some other English speakers I have heard here! Well written and well read.
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Date: 5/2/2019 7:27:00 PM
Perfect Rhyme, ^WW^, beautiful subject and great flow. Great for a win. Thank you for your wonderful inspiring comment. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/2/2019 9:18:00 AM
Wonderfully said, dear poet! Hugs...Kim
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Date: 5/2/2019 5:56:00 AM
Your mother Emma's memory will live forever now. She is so beautiful! This poem is an expression of love, and hope and wonder my friend. Drop the mike, Winged Warrior. Drop the mike! A FAV for me!
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Date: 5/2/2019 3:03:00 AM
- GORGEOUS !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/2/2019 2:11:00 AM
A beautiful dedication to your mother W.W. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
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