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PSEUDO-LIMERICK...  WINK WINK NUDGE NUDGE  ;-)

NON RHYMING and 9-9-4-4-9 SYLLABLES INSTEAD OF 9s and 5s

POETIC LICENCE LOL

 

 



I’ve seen the evil eyes of madness
Psychotic and vicious as can be
I thought to run
I thought to hide
Fearing for my safety climbed a tree



posted on February 13, 2019

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Date: 2/14/2019 7:30:00 PM
I have too. Interesting conclusion, in a tree
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Date: 2/14/2019 8:42:00 PM
As long as we're safe now... and we know what to stay away from. LOL
Date: 2/13/2019 10:25:00 PM
I think this is genius, Line! It's the 'cat's meow.' (Wink, wink). A FAVE! ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/14/2019 8:43:00 PM
LOL thank you so much, Gershon, for the wonderful compliment.
Date: 2/13/2019 7:34:00 PM
Yep, I caught the pseudo part. wink wink!
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:50:00 PM
LOL
Date: 2/13/2019 4:45:00 PM
Unique Limerick but, it works well; such eyes...bone chilling.
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Date: 2/13/2019 5:21:00 PM
Yes, I realize that it's not your usual light humor!! LOL
Date: 2/13/2019 2:25:00 PM
very imaginative & creative
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Date: 2/13/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thanks, Jack. Means a lot coming from you.
Date: 2/13/2019 1:11:00 PM
A great limerick but hope I never see eyes of madness , no wonder you climbed up a tree! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:33:00 PM
O Jennifer - you must know me well... I just had to go do it immediately. Thanks for the nudge.
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:24:00 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. It is very limerick sounding. I'll probably tweak it someday to have the right number of syllables.
Date: 2/13/2019 10:50:00 AM
I liked it. Where else would you go?
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Date: 2/13/2019 11:21:00 AM
Obviously. LOL