Eyes of Hourglass

Deep in the eyes of you,
The edge of the rift looses ground to my grip,
But strong forces that orbit my vibe ,my being ,
My seeing of a complex covex figure

Stop gazing upon my soul trying to read me 
Decieve me you jugde me to blood see
The eyes of a flame being black,leaving shadows to cracks

Reflection of section the spark full flame and in front of my name was  a small picture frame  
which contained memories of the past never to be found again.

Much Love 
Richard Q. Corbett
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loving Iii Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 4:18 PM
the title is the key that bring it all together. very good. john
Mckenzie Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura
Mason Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 10:44 AM
Interesting title/write here, Richard. One little thing though ... smile ... the word "judge" has letters backwards on Line 6 and also deceive is part of that rule of "i before e except after c" ... so please excuse my english teacher obsession and know that this is a very well deserved selection to be a feature this week here at the soup. Congratulations!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations Richard, on your lyric "Eyes Of Hourglass" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
Jordan Avatar
February 15, 2009 at 9:51 PM
Richard - Congratulations on having your poem featured this week - God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 7:08 AM
Sad one, but nicely done! Has a bittersweet feel. ~ Carrie
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