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Eyes of An Immigrant

The musty, foul smelling Boat rocks The room is dim And silent Everyone is waiting For the shores of Ellis Island They hope to have a new life Start over in America The room awakens When the captain yells "Land ahead" Everyone cheers I see the gleaming copper Statue of Liberty I can smell the fresh salty air My heart is filled with optimism My dreams are so close to coming true But the same cannot be said for others Some are sent back for illness Or not enough money Or no ride They send you back To that hopeless land Back on the dim boat Where dreams once lived but now are lost Yet others are let through To the country of America Where a better life awaits Filled with hope In the land of opportunity I smile a happy smile I am almost there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/10/2016 2:16:00 AM
Kaela Aalto, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 7/18/2013 11:41:00 PM
Hi Kaela, love the smile, you have here... , -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/18/2013 7:33:00 PM
Kaela, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 7/18/2013 11:03:00 AM
-Hi, Kaela ! - A good written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2013 4:44:00 AM
This poem resonated so true with me. A great write on what it must have felt like-- to arrive in the land of the free. We did the ferry trip across to Liberty Island and Ellis Island around a year back-- visiting from S/Africa. We have green Cards and really hope to immigrate to your wonderful country soon.
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Date: 7/17/2013 11:02:00 PM
nicely done, and welcome to PoetrySoup
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Date: 7/17/2013 9:22:00 PM
glad you made it
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