Notes About The Poem

For: PENTASTITCH IT Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
October 26, 2025
 

Eyes In Fireglow

In your eyes
fire flames and ignites
embers of desire
I thought dead in coldness of
loneliness.

Loneliness 
is turned inside out,
becoming the warmth
infusing love to entire
galaxies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Banerjee Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 8:28 PM
Very strong imagery! Congrats :)
Achara Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 9:14 PM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 11:38 AM
Wow I love how you worked this theme. Great job. Glad to see this on the winner list
Achara Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 11:57 AM
Thank you.
Rv Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 10:18 PM
What a powerful verse.. just a heads up, looks like we need to submit two verses! Good luck, this should do so well :)
Achara Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 7:29 AM
Thank you. I missed that
Hind Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 5:21 PM
Good luck!! This has a lovely end
Achara Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 7:37 PM
Thank you
Sheehan Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Nice piece. Wonderful imagery. Powerful pen. Good luck in contest.
Achara Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 4:20 PM
Thank you
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