Eyes Are the Gateway To the Soul

Look into the eyes,
Dark colored gate, flame and greed,
Eyes reflect the soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bahr Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 8:03 PM
Deep words!
Bird Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Hi Aly, thank you for your comment, I like how poetry can express more emotions and meaning then we sometimes can in words! - Phoenix :)
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September 19, 2023 at 1:15 PM
I like the line Eyes reflect the soul... That is so true.
Bird Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 2:34 PM
Hi Uwe, thanks for the comment!! - Phoenix:)
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:29 PM
Nice read. If you are new here, welcome
Bird Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 1:02 AM
Hi Andrea, yes, I am new to poetry soup, and I am really enjoying it, thanks! - Phoenix :)
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:11 PM
For sure! Although when I looked at my dilapidated shoes, I realized that my eyes were the gateway to my soles! lol.
Bird Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Hahaha, true! -Phoenix :)
Dutta Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Mostly true, but not always. I met few guys with innocent eyes but owning wicked heart. Yet in most cases, I agree with you. Eyes may reflect soul. Blessings.
Bird Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Hi Anisha, there are the few people that have the most beautiful and innocent eyes but have a terrible heart, thank you for the comment! - Phoenix :)
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September 11, 2023 at 1:18 AM
So they do Phoenix, a splendid Haiku… Belle
Bird Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 2:13 AM
Thank you, Belle, most people's soul are beautiful but you have the few people... - Phoenix :)
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September 11, 2023 at 1:14 AM
This is very true and to the point. Well done.
Bird Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 2:14 AM
Thank you, Victor, a very encouraging comment. - Phoenix :)
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