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Eyes and Oceans

Whoever said open eyes betray emotion never knew them closed. For, love is an ocean 'til the rivers feeding it give up the ghost. I stand huddled at this puddle, puzzled, foot nuzzling the coast. No ghost or god of old pages boasted could sing these hollow notes.

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Skat A

Date: 12/26/2013 12:18:00 AM

Richie, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/15/2013 4:48:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Richie ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2013 6:56:00 PM

Hi Richie, , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@