Susan Palli Poet Couplet

Eyes

Deep dark chocolate ones fill me with pure awe, 
shining with pure empathy and cover every flaw.

Icy blue glacier ones fill me with insight, 
they're a mirror to my thoughts and sparkle oh so bright.

Emerald jewel green ones, twinkle softly---make me dream, 
as they cast their glaze upon me, comes warmth like a gentle stream.


Hybrid hazel topaz ones at dusk or morning light, 
capture me with many hues and bring my heart delight.

As we see such loving eyes, stunning beauty we behold.
Thanks to our Grand Creator----diversity He bestowed.



April 23, 2016
Revised August 1, 2016

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Lyric Man May 13, 2018 at 9:45 PM Susan.. Your words leap as if inspired!

J Wilton Jones February 5, 2017 at 11:52 AM The eyes have it, beauty! To each one their own identity.

Bl Devnath April 30, 2016 at 10:18 AM Congratulation my lovely friend on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl

Hansteven Selfa April 30, 2016 at 8:57 AM Congratulations Susan on your win. You write with confidence and power, and most of all beauty and diversity! Keep up the good work as I continue to read your works! _ Hansteven

Vladislav Raven April 29, 2016 at 5:53 PM Hi Susan, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Such a diversity of eyes. An excellent write. A seven. Hugs....Mike. XX Susan Palli April 30, 2016 at 8:18 AM Thank you so much, Mike!

Joseph May April 29, 2016 at 2:33 PM Beautiful write Susan...Congrats on the win Susan Palli April 30, 2016 at 8:18 AM Thank you, Joseph!

Poet Destroyer A April 29, 2016 at 10:30 AM Susan, Congratulations on your Beauty and Diversity WIN:):):) I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "A Writer" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Susan Palli April 29, 2016 at 1:37 PM Thank you very much, Linda. I liked this theme and the entries are excellent!

Joanna Daniel April 28, 2016 at 6:50 AM Great write on the "eyes-the light of the body (Matthew 6:22)" Susan Palli April 28, 2016 at 2:48 PM Thank you, Jo!

Pandita Sietesantos April 23, 2016 at 9:32 AM The eyes - the windows to the soul! What a beautiful, emotive write expressing the significance and depth of the eyes! Well done, my friend! Pandita Susan Palli April 28, 2016 at 2:03 AM Thanks, Pandita! I appreciate the feedback.

Bl Devnath April 23, 2016 at 8:47 AM Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Susan Palli April 28, 2016 at 2:03 AM Thank you, BL. Good to hear from you!

Steven Henderson April 23, 2016 at 7:17 AM Lovely Susan! I actually read twice because I enjoyed the rhythm of the and the words themselves. Peace and many blessings to you. Susan Palli April 28, 2016 at 2:05 AM Thanks so much Steve! Peace to you too :)