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Eyes

Deep dark chocolate ones fill me with pure awe, 
shining with pure empathy and cover every flaw.

Icy blue glacier ones fill me with insight, 
they're a mirror to my thoughts and sparkle oh so bright.

Emerald jewel green ones, twinkle softly---make me dream, 
as they cast their glaze upon me, comes warmth like a gentle stream.


Hybrid hazel topaz ones at dusk or morning light, 
capture me with many hues and bring my heart delight.

As we see such loving eyes, stunning beauty we behold.
Thanks to our Grand Creator----diversity He bestowed.



April 23, 2016
Revised August 1, 2016

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Lyric Man Date: 5/13/2018 9:45:00 PM Susan.. Your words leap as if inspired! Login to Reply

J Wilton Jones Date: 2/5/2017 11:52:00 AM The eyes have it, beauty! To each one their own identity. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 4/30/2016 10:18:00 AM Congratulation my lovely friend on your beautiful win. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Hansteven Selfa Date: 4/30/2016 8:57:00 AM Congratulations Susan on your win. You write with confidence and power, and most of all beauty and diversity! Keep up the good work as I continue to read your works! _ Hansteven Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 4/29/2016 5:53:00 PM Hi Susan, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Such a diversity of eyes. An excellent write. A seven. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Susan Palli Date: 4/30/2016 8:18:00 AM Thank you so much, Mike!

Joseph May Date: 4/29/2016 2:33:00 PM Beautiful write Susan...Congrats on the win Login to Reply Susan Palli Date: 4/30/2016 8:18:00 AM Thank you, Joseph!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/29/2016 10:30:00 AM Susan, Congratulations on your Beauty and Diversity WIN:):):) I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "A Writer" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Susan Palli Date: 4/29/2016 1:37:00 PM Thank you very much, Linda. I liked this theme and the entries are excellent!

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/28/2016 6:50:00 AM Great write on the "eyes-the light of the body (Matthew 6:22)" Login to Reply Susan Palli Date: 4/28/2016 2:48:00 PM Thank you, Jo!

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 4/23/2016 9:32:00 AM The eyes - the windows to the soul! What a beautiful, emotive write expressing the significance and depth of the eyes! Well done, my friend! Pandita Login to Reply Susan Palli Date: 4/28/2016 2:03:00 AM Thanks, Pandita! I appreciate the feedback.

Bl Devnath Date: 4/23/2016 8:47:00 AM Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Susan Palli Date: 4/28/2016 2:03:00 AM Thank you, BL. Good to hear from you!

Steven Henderson Date: 4/23/2016 7:17:00 AM Lovely Susan! I actually read twice because I enjoyed the rhythm of the and the words themselves. Peace and many blessings to you. Login to Reply Susan Palli Date: 4/28/2016 2:05:00 AM Thanks so much Steve! Peace to you too :)