Eyes

She took me by surprise,
With the beauty of her eyes,
Resembling two blue oceans,
Just as deep; just as wide.

Her Pacific and Atlantic,
Gently make my heartbeat frantic,
Because of her two blue oceans,
I’m lost at sea and won’t panic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 9, 2010 at 2:53 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Mike A. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 10:11 AM
I love the last line of your first stanza this is a beautiful write..P.D.
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