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Eyes

She took me by surprise, With the beauty of her eyes, Resembling two blue oceans, Just as deep; just as wide. Her Pacific and Atlantic, Gently make my heartbeat frantic, Because of her two blue oceans, I’m lost at sea and won’t panic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/9/2010 2:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Mike A. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:11:00 AM
I love the last line of your first stanza this is a beautiful write..P.D.
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