Eyes

Soft steel staring hard.
Don't lie to her, she knows your heart.
From the ocean salt tears fall.
Hold her close and catch them all.
Bright, blue skies keep clouds away,
Because you love her everyday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 24, 2009 at 8:43 PM
Beautiful poem, You can look into a person's soul and read them so clearly with what is hidden within their eyes..."From the ocean salt tears fall. Hold her close and catch them all". There is so much beauty and creativity here. This is very deep for just a few lines..GB, Tyesha
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