Eyes

Eyes
precious orbs
flirtatious in brown
bring a heart alive
remembering other eyes.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 12, 2009 at 10:56 AM

Now this is awesome Sue. Love, Carol

Farah Chamma

March 5, 2009 at 4:04 AM

That's a great piece Sue..So much said in a little :) Thank you for sharing it... Oh, my birthday is on the 6th of April...it's real soon...I have been planning on doing something warm and special this year...with my family and classmates... Thank you very much Sue..really.. my turn to smile =) Always, TYOne, Farah

Randy Biffany

February 27, 2009 at 3:35 PM

I've begun enjoying your creativity, knowledge of poetry forms and appreciate your encouragement on entering my poem into Laura's Ocean contest which I did. Randy

Sara Lokken

February 21, 2009 at 12:38 PM

The eyes are special...a thing of the soul. Beautifully written. Best wishes, Sara:)

Lucinda Bulger

February 16, 2009 at 8:55 PM

ery descriptive for such a short format. Well done! Thanks so much for your comment on "bruises of the creative mind" you really got what I was trying to reflect in that piece. It just makes me smile alot... when we can be totally honest with ourselves, healing happens... much love, Lucinda

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