Noorulain Ayesha Poet Prose Poetry

Eyes

I held your hand
in unconsciousness
as my eyes
were staring your's
and you didn't held it back
that's when my heart
told me to stop
not because i felt your hand
wasn't above mine
but your eyes
the way they stopped looking at me,
as something special anymore....!

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Faraz Ajmal March 26, 2018 at 12:48 PM It s a really sad and beautifully written poem, in just 12 lines I guess you have described everything, and yoy have described it reallu beautifully that how the eyes tell that he was no longer alive, Noorulain Ayesha March 27, 2018 at 5:50 AM Annn...Thankyou..btw here is a difference in imagination,.I didn't write it for a person who was no more, but it was the love which lost between them, well your thoughts can go with it too,.Anyways thank you for always appreciating.