Eyes

I held your hand in unconsciousness as my eyes were staring your's and you didn't held it back that's when my heart told me to stop not because i felt your hand wasn't above mine but your eyes the way they stopped looking at me, as something special anymore....!

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/26/2018 12:48:00 PM

It s a really sad and beautifully written poem, in just 12 lines I guess you have described everything, and yoy have described it reallu beautifully that how the eyes tell that he was no longer alive,

Noorulain Ayesha
Date: 3/27/2018 5:50:00 AM

Annn...Thankyou..btw here is a difference in imagination,.I didn't write it for a person who was no more, but it was the love which lost between them, well your thoughts can go with it too,.Anyways thank you for always appreciating.