Eye-Opener

EYE-OPENER

Heavy lids held open with weighted mug of crushed beans.

10/13/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Anthony Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 2:39 AM
Perfect reflection of a delicious soup's smell. Great work.
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 9:18 PM
There's no mystery here... your poem is perfectly convolutedly crystal clear. Bravo.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 9:51 PM
LOL! Thanks!
Callus Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 8:02 AM
I can relate perfectly to this one-liner, Kim...I'm a coffee lover, black & strong! Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 10:09 PM
Thanks, Paul!
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 3:21 PM
Made me smile Kim ... but i'm a tea lover:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 6:44 AM
<3 Jan :) I drink tea sometimes
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:12 AM
NICE :) xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Thanks Maureen!
One Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Coffee.... What would we do without it!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 9:16 AM
I love my morning coffee!!
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