Eyeing the Hourglass

EYEING THE HOURGLASS

curious he watches grains of sand fall
for first time in his three years
cognitive of future

4/7/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 11:45 AM
oh how wonderful to watch them grow Kim - i love this age when they are so inquisitive and eager to learn:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Thanks a bunch, Jan! * * * * *
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 10:35 PM
I haven't seen this form before Kim, absolutely sweet, and a great age for observing. ....Maria xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Thanks, Maria! I like this form!
Gupta Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Clever Kimo, Kim ... A nice read ...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Thanks, Probir! xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 7:09 PM
An interesting Kimo, Kim. About the time when kids start to really form who they are.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Thanks! It is a great age!
Cunningham Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 1:34 PM
The learning journey begins, lovely to see young children growing up, my two young grandsons' question everything.Lovely kimo Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Thanks, Tom!
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