Eye-Catching

You who dwell in the gardens
                               with friends
                              in attendance, 
                       let me hear your voice!
                          Song of songs 8:13

         She said loudly, " You are not handsome, 
          I don't know why some ladies are crazy
                     For you." If more handsome 
              Lesser chances of approachability. 

              You are very beautiful, reason why me 
               And hundreds of men are crazy for you. 
             She smiled , the compliment found place
          In her brain. She said, " I don't know why you
                       Still single at your now age." 

           I know that you are waiting for a handsome
          Man from heaven  reason why I am still single 
        Chasing you day and night... am l wrong or  right? 
         Know this , my first look at you melted my heart.

    She said," I was jocking that you are not handsome.
     I was waiting for you dear, can you take me home? 
                             I like your characters, 
                      You are the answer of prayers." 
       Oh! Yes, It is time to inform friends and relatives. 

I will be happy when my face will appear in your dreams.
    Dreaming about our big day and more world visitors 
                   Coming to celebrate with us. 
              She was staring at me, using eyes
                     To say ," happy,  yes ,yes!"

     Chocolate girls , whites, browns, yellows,  blacks
    Eye - catching,  attention seizing by future couples.

                              April 30/2023
                    Written for poetry contest
                     sponsored by  Sotto Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 10:01 AM
A lovely romantic, playful, piece Alfonso. Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
Thank you so much for your compliment, concern and appreciation dear Sam. Your most welcome.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed your write "EYE-CATCHING." Have a blessed day..................
Thank you so much dear Paula. Your important visit and compliments noted. You are welcome
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 11:01 AM
- Eyes can say a lot :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Alfonso :) -
Well said...eyes speak a lot. Thank you so much for visit and compliments. You are welcome my friend.
Poet Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 9:37 PM
Congratulations on writing such a great poem with poetry's elegance in my contest.
Thank you so much for your visit and compliments... I am so happy with the placement my friend. Your most welcome
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