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E y e saw you in the loveliest of dreams. Your eyes met mine; instant a t t r a c t i o n! love bloomed like... r o s e s. I borrowed love songs... from the birds and taught your... s o u l how to sing them; magical happenstance; d r e a m.... to last a lifetime! (Yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 08/22/2020

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Date: 8/22/2020 12:52:00 PM
This is so beautiful and romantic--perfect for the form you invented!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/22/2020 7:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:)

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