Notes About The Poem

Eye Saw You

E y e saw you 
     in the loveliest 
          of dreams.

Your eyes met mine;
     instant a t t r a c t i o n!
          love bloomed like...

r o s e s.
     I borrowed 
          love songs...

from the birds 
     and taught your... 
          s o u l how to sing them;

magical happenstance;
     d r e a m....
          to last a lifetime!

          (Yalto)

"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Date written: 08/22/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Pandit Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:52 PM
This is so beautiful and romantic--perfect for the form you invented!
Ibeh Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 7:29 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:)
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