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Poetic Form: Haiku
Inspired: 2024 July 15
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eye openers

if absence make the heart grow fonder ~ presence make heart run better if you take money from high interest banks ~ make sure they know its a loan a dime a dozen are friends that back you ~ true friends a penny well-earned Humpty wall sitter Dumpty egg cracker ~ egghead scramled hard bootleg a penny face up bearers Midas Touch ~ penny face down ~ leave aground
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:09 PM
Aloha! I enjoyed to read this poem. I like the whole Haiku. it will be my fav. My friend Aloha! /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Aloha! I am glad i made you smile. aloha!/ Darlene/
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 10:41 PM
My thanks Darlene, I say with a smile, Aloha William
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