Eye In the Sky - Haiku

Eye in the Sky

God sees everything
because we live in God's eye,
God's eye "is" the sky.

by Jean McLoughlin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Christian Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 10:09 AM
So good and so true, I wrote a poem a long time ago about looking out the window, and how God watches out of his window looking out for us
Daniel Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 5:09 AM
Short but sweet:) well written, Jean:) hope you are well:)
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 1:37 PM
lovely lines Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcloughlin Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Thank you so much Jan, I've been away from poetrySoup for a little while but am back again now! Hope all is well with you. jx
Mcconnell Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 11:21 AM
Rather good Jean, such originality of thought displayed so well. Trust all's well, Gordon
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