Eye Candy

Night sky perfection
Lonely Mountain star gazes
With its good left eye

Entry for Gareth James’ contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 15, 2013 at 4:45 PM
Hi Shawn, hope your days are filled with joy... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"
Austin Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Super Haiku. Great image. I feel like I've seen it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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December 17, 2012 at 3:35 PM
good visual and sweet lovely view... love the dreamy ku...pd
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 8:37 PM
A fine use of images revealing explicit meanings. Good luck in the contest
Mckenzie Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 6:48 PM
Shawn~ This is great I think this is going to do well in the contest! Good Luck! Laura :)
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