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Exuberant Light

Exuberant Light Selfless rays spring from tonal anagrams Crystal daybreaks that never know twilight Released from the pure rhapsody “I Am” Innocent of intention, free of night, Nascent from infinity’s essence – light - Unselfish benediction leaping up Vitality born in perfection’s cup Pure spirit, benevolent chivalry, Enduring present animas closeup, Crucible, animation’s ministry. Breathless, lives without infected judgement, Simply chanted bliss in the present tense Torrents of chaste delight’s descant descent Dainty clarity, effervescent zest, Seeks no return – collects no interest - Unselfish bounty - Eternal always – Cascading lambent merriment of praise No need of sun or moon nativity Incorruptible abundance ablaze Light sings everlasting festivity. 11-16-21 Contest: Agendaless Exuberance Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker Syllables checked with PS

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/27/2021 1:58:00 AM

An outstanding poem, as expected from your pen, Sam! Congrats on your win!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/29/2021 11:23:00 AM

Loved this theme Seeker! Thank you so much not only for your placement but your expression of congratulations. So happy you liked it. This theme really spoke to my inner Tigger! It was truly an honor to be on the winners list among so many wonderful entries. Sending you blessings and all the best for this special holiday season.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/23/2021 7:39:00 PM

A delightful write Sam, a double Dizaine too, well done you. Exuberant Light is amazing, it feeds the soul and guides the way to that place in the sky we go to some day… Belle

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/23/2021 12:52:00 PM

Enjoyed this poem lauding exuberance --delightfully executed in this difficult form, Sam. Your talented write shines in precious chosen words. Superbly done!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/20/2021 5:08:00 AM

Awesome poetry, Sam, it was difficult writing one and you managed to wow in two:) excellent work:)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/29/2021 11:26:00 AM

Thank you Jo! I have to admit I fouled up the rhyme scheme of the first attempt then had to go back and make corrections. Hmm :(. So happy you liked this one. It was definitely fun to write. Sending you all of the blessings of this amazing season where exuberance dances!

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/19/2021 3:24:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful Sam and I love the ending too :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/20/2021 12:50:00 PM

Heidi, thank you so much. It was fun to ponder on the natural state of light! I like the ending too - an ongoing celebration! What could be better? Happy Thanksgiving!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/19/2021 1:39:00 AM

Oh how i wish, Sam, you write the way it should be, for the perfect world.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/19/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thank you Harry! Truly light, in its purest form, has much to teach us about creating a perfect world without agendas! Thank you so much for your lovely message and delightful feedback. This theme provided many minutes of reflection and meditation on what in life has no agenda. Sending you blessings of light!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2021 3:16:00 PM

gosh you did TWO of these Dizaines? Wow, you are very ambitious and you did very well, Sam. such a lovely theme.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/19/2021 8:52:00 AM

Hi Andrea! Thank you for your message. I really appreciate it as the contest theme was challenging - finding something that has no underlying agenda to its existence! To be honest, when I wrote the first version it was not in the Dizain format! Yikes. When I went back to review the contest requirements, I realized my mistake. Back to the drawing board!! I am so glad you like the results of attempt #2! :) Sending you blessings of light my friend!