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Extreme Unction T B

when blood ebbs cold 
           and threshold past
             consoled at last


Than-Bauk Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina
25/11/2020

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/7/2020 2:44:00 PM

many congrats on your win David:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/7/2020 4:00:00 PM

Hi Jan thank you so much for the visit cheers David

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/5/2020 9:25:00 PM

The extreme anointing of grace so well expressed, David. Congratulations on the blessings of your win!

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/6/2020 12:43:00 AM

Thank you Sam, I think the pandemic brought it to mind, cheers David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2020 3:47:00 AM

Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/5/2020 5:50:00 AM

Your too kind Sara thank you so much cheers David

Eve Roper

Date: 12/4/2020 8:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/5/2020 5:49:00 AM

Thank you so much eve I’m delighted cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/4/2020 2:48:00 PM

Hi David, Good entry for the contest. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-)Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/4/2020 3:56:00 PM

So lucky to get a place I’m delighted Alexis, thank you for the congrats cheers David

Charles Messina

Date: 12/4/2020 1:11:00 PM

Very nicely done, David. Great entry! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Stay well.. All the best, Charlie

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/4/2020 1:17:00 PM

Was a pleasure Charlie, great contest, enjoyed the than-Bauk style, I’m delighted with your placement cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/26/2020 11:44:00 AM

Reminds me David of one of my favorite word play jokes When Bob on Shooting Stars says to Vic Reeves 1Do that to me 1 more time Vic And ill Murder you With Cold Blood

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/26/2020 12:03:00 PM

Thanks Christopher This is a pretty obscure form of poetry I read some of these “than bauks” on unseen seekers page, He/She is so good at abstract poetry, then the contest came along so I gave it a go, not as easy as it looks cheers David

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/26/2020 11:48:00 AM

I must admit or say David I myself would have to google or look up half of the formats of poetry you are able to write or perform . I dont even know what they are or have even heard of them . Love your work

Extreme Unction T B

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