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Extract of Unhappiness

I have emptyness inside my bristling bones Filled with sorrow, away, alone I'm in between the lines of a blank paper separate from the others, like a skyscraper Does anyone lend out a hand? Does anyone understand? Only one but he has reasons to be gone at certain seasons Will I ever find another friend? Will I survive till the end? I grow weiry of these feelings I am tired, unexpired Tick tock tick goes the clock I await for him to step in the door Then these feelings go away But not forever, They'll be back someday......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/16/2010 4:08:00 PM
Yes,you really express your unhappiness here. Good writing and a fitting title. I hope you can one day write of happy things too! Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/14/2010 10:40:00 PM
A beautiful piece of poetry and it read like a mini story. Enjoy your night. :)
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your feelings through your poetry with us today Lea. Please keep writing and sharing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2010 8:41:00 PM
Hi, Lea...this is cool because I can acutally understand what you're talking about. Question: can you actually respond to someone's comment of your poems, if so, how? I'm still trying to figure this site out. ... you asked about illness I may have, and I wanted to respond.
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Date: 1/12/2010 2:05:00 PM
gloomy,are you an old and weakened wife of a deer hunter? i'd like to lift your spirits, but your husband may come home with a shotgun. read the funnies, or watch reruns of Frazier, or other non-objectionable sitcoms, ma'am! it sounds as if you have love when he's there, so you just need an enjoyable distraction y'know what i hate? i never know when i read a poem, if the writer is expressing a need for advice, or crafting a fictional poem, setting a mood, or what. sometimes i pontificate
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