Exquisite Escape

E xquisite weather

S harp, clear day_emotions untether

C louds sparse_float lightly away

A ppealing desires to let's go_ forever stay
 
P lay over the hill very far_ let's stray

E thereal weather_blessed fall day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 2:00 AM
thank you for sharing this peace with us Sara duncan
Brown Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Sara. May your days always be filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 12:33 PM
to handle both acrostic and graceful ryhmes.. wonderful, sara! nette
Austin Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Super acrostic - I especially like A. Love, Dave
Mehta Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 6:16 AM
will come later, sara
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