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Expulsion

the end of the bridge
                                 my heart aches tears roll down cheeks
                                              goodbye my country

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Ana Espinola Collins

February 1, 2015 at 8:28 PM

A poetic sad goodbye....nicely done Rajat...7 :)Ana

M. L. Kiser

January 26, 2015 at 3:50 PM

A very sad Haiku, but a well described experience.

Paul Callus

January 26, 2015 at 2:34 PM

Having read the comments below, this poem makes a lot of sense; very touching! #7 expulsion, suffering and survival are very strong words, Rajat! // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

January 26, 2015 at 12:54 PM

Oh, how very sad to be exiled from one's homeland! You reflected all those heart- tugging sentiments in this awesome Haiku! This one gets a solid "7" all the way! Bravo! Pandita.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

January 26, 2015 at 1:05 PM

Pandita my parents struggled so that we can see better future.We were virtually expelled from our own land and set foot in a new land." the end of the bridge" conveys the feel of a beginning of despair. Love>rajat