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Exploring the Sky

By clasping the lightning string I reach the sky Wondrous view there, I spy Sitting on the fluffy clouds I roam everywhere Outspread clouds, my magic chairs Crafting shapes out of clouds I drive a dinosaur, Sometimes rabbits, lion and omnivores Goading the animals I explore the sky's grandeur And search for the heaven's door Seeing a big dark black figure I shout aloud He does magnetize all the fluffy clouds No shades of blue, all black now I sit on top there Wondering, is everything fair? Suddenly the thunderstorms drum I cascade down As a raindrop and reaches a town On seizing me A child in the town, grins cheerfully And the entire town, receive me gladly Glimpsing above On seeing the dark black figure, they bow Gratitude for having his darshan, they show Not all angels wear white dress Plenty of them are in disguise I perceived!!! September 18 2021
*Darshan : an opportunity to see or an occasion of seeing a holy person or the image of a deity.

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Date: 10/2/2021 8:52:00 AM
loved your poem!God bless!!
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Date: 9/19/2021 2:52:00 PM
No not all angels dress in white, some are invisible but boy can they fly, :)
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Date: 9/19/2021 11:36:00 AM
wow, what great metaphors here. Such a creative piece of poetry, Supraja!!
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Date: 9/19/2021 8:57:00 AM
Beautiful, stunning piece. I especially loved the lines "Crafting shapes out of clouds, I drive a dinosaur, sometimes rabbits, lions and omniores"....Fabulous!
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Date: 9/19/2021 1:47:00 AM
Wow! this is alluring imagery, Supraja, loved the ride throughout, right from the sky to the clouds to the rain, amazing:)
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Date: 9/18/2021 11:16:00 PM
Oh my, so imaginative... did all this occur in your dream sweet friend... Loved the flow of your thoughts in this beautiful write... Have a blessed day dear Supraja... Hugs... ~ Ani .
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Date: 9/18/2021 11:38:00 AM
Oh well done. "Not all angels wear a white dress. Some are in disguise." So true. They are all around us. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/18/2021 7:50:00 AM
WoW! Supraja, You have composed such a well-written write with top-notch imagery. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Thanks for visiting my page. Have wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/18/2021 7:16:00 AM
Oh, I love the idea of being up in the sky and shaping the clouds into shapes. Great poem, Supraja.
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Date: 9/18/2021 6:39:00 AM
This is among your best poems Supraja. Your imagery takes the reader into mystical exploration. I agree with Victor. A FAVE for me too. Wishing you a POTD.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/18/2021 6:53:00 AM
Aww!!! Thank you so much... That's so kind of you to say this... It means a lot to me... Thank s a lot...
Date: 9/18/2021 6:24:00 AM
What a wonderful description of the sky, then turning to rain. Great imagery with all pleasant thoughts. A fave.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/18/2021 6:26:00 AM
Thank you so much for favoriting this write... It means a lot to me... Thanks for stopping by ...

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