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Exploring

Split rail lined
rough as the path trod
hands tracing, guiding
blind, no voice only splinters
maligned her journey,
taking her from one place
then returning.

adventureenclosed rhyme

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Sean L Sanders

August 1, 2013 at 10:37 AM

Congratulation on being featured. Excellent poetry poet.

Sara Kendrick

July 31, 2013 at 11:26 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congrats on your place of glory...Sara

Shadow Hamilton

July 27, 2013 at 5:40 PM

hi Dallas congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles

Poet Destroyer A

July 27, 2013 at 1:53 PM

Dallas, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 14, 2013 at 3:53 AM

Hi, Dallas. - A good written poem. - Like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise

Skat A

July 13, 2013 at 6:45 PM

I love the name Dallas, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"