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Explore*** Trois Par Huit***

Trois Par Huit
AAB BB CCC
3,6,9,12,12,9,6,3

                                                        Prince of bliss
                                                 has risen with the kiss,
                                       you have planted on my collarbone.

                         Thoughts of things to come whip around like a cyclone
                             in my mind. No longer alone, our love has grown..

                                     Lets not postpone, I yearn to be yours,
                                            yearn to bathe on your shores,
                                                           to explore!!!


Jared Pickett
5/21/2010
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen June 3, 2010 at 11:01 AM Hats off to the Prince of Bliss, JARED! Another good exploration into poetry with love words. Keep up the good writing. Smiles, Dane Ann

William Arthur Tell June 2, 2010 at 10:42 AM New Friend as well. Greetings Jared. Thankyou for the kind reply. I enjoyed trying to enter your contest. That was my first poem of that type. I thank you for having the contest which encouraged me to try. It is an honour to have been considered for second. I have read your this piece. Very Nice. I shall look at your other work. Have a Great Day ! Ciao for now. P.S. - here's to more poem fun in the future. Amen.

Doris Culverhouse June 1, 2010 at 11:45 AM enjoyed! I will have to check this contest out, and hope to have a fun challenge.

Sharon Tideswell May 31, 2010 at 1:50 PM Hats off to anyone who can use collarbone as a rhyme :) Great example of a trois par huit. Nice internal rhyme too.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 27, 2010 at 4:46 PM Well this is cool .. and as a rule ... I always hear from u ... these past few days ... on beach in haze... wondering what u up to?...with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2010 at 4:26 PM GREAT example for your contest, Jared! I enjoyed this one. Andrea

Satin Doll Diva May 22, 2010 at 1:35 PM I have entered your contest Mr. Pickett and hope you like my entry and the centering was tough on this site. Satin Doll Diva

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 22, 2010 at 8:28 AM Hi Jared :) This is really a great example--I'm excited to try out this new form of poetry, so thanks for introducing us to these forms--will be sending you soup mail! :)

May 21, 2010 at 9:15 PM What a wonderful poem and example. Love that "Prince of Bliss" and exploring. You'll always be my favorite poet Mr. JP. Nice and romantic. Going to my favorites. Scarlett

Charmaine Chircop May 21, 2010 at 11:10 AM Very sweet and beautiful and that cyclone whirlwinding. .let us wonder,great write Jared. .Charma.