Experimental poem

Deeply in thought of my past -wise owl oversees 

my eyes scanning the sea -boats peacefully sail 

hair frazzled by oceans kiss -seagulls gather strands 

my feet tangled in the roots -fawn is caught off guard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 5:12 PM
Hello Karen, your poem made me feel i was there. Enjoy your evening my cfriend. Hugs./Darlene/
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August 8, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Hello Karen, This poem is called other. I will look up aq poem that begins with ag. Hugs. /Darlene./
Croft Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Thank you I was looking different forms of poetry up and this started with a g I can't pronounce it but it was something different I wanted to try!
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