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Deeply in thought of my past -wise owl oversees my eyes scanning the sea -boats peacefully sail hair frazzled by oceans kiss -seagulls gather strands my feet tangled in the roots -fawn is caught off guard

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Date: 8/7/2024 5:12:00 PM
Hello Karen, your poem made me feel i was there. Enjoy your evening my cfriend. Hugs./Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2024 10:55:00 AM
Hello Karen, This poem is called other. I will look up aq poem that begins with ag. Hugs. /Darlene./
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Karen Croft
Date: 8/7/2024 5:26:00 PM
Thank you I was looking different forms of poetry up and this started with a g I can't pronounce it but it was something different I wanted to try!

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