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Experiencing Paradise

Place where your inner being is totally at ease Always and forever Reaching any expectation beyond you can Assume or imagine being in Disbelief and in Awe sharing this experience with all your loved ones In your life Spending eternity with The King of Kings and being Enveloped in his love and care... 12/21/2015 John Hamilton Acrostic Paradise Contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/25/2015 2:02:00 PM

I like your take on the paradise theme, Michael. I had one ready to post, but this morning I changed my mind and posted a new one instead! Hope you had a lovely Christmas day ~ Regards // paul

Michael Tor
Date: 2/4/2016 8:35:00 PM

Thank you Paul sorry for late response.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2015 6:29:00 PM

wait till you see MY values system. heehee. Maybe I will do fantasy romance for paradise(since I don't really get it!!)hahaha

Michael Tor
Date: 12/22/2015 8:42:00 PM

lol you are too funny Andrea. lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2015 2:22:00 PM

very nicely done. It is so cool to see different people's ideas of paradise!

Michael Tor
Date: 12/21/2015 6:07:00 PM

It's nice to see peoples value system in this write Andrea. Thanks for visiting amiga.

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/21/2015 9:31:00 AM

MY FRIEND, THIS IS A FINE POEM. IT EXPRESSES , HEART , INSPIRATION, LOVE, SINCERITY AND TRUTH... And proudly points to the true paradise that mankind so often rejects! A7

Michael Tor
Date: 12/21/2015 6:10:00 PM

Hi Robert, thank you so much for this generous comment. So true my friend. Blessings to you and your lovely wife. Hope you are well Robert. I will have to come and visit my friend.