Michael Tor Poet Acrostic

Experiencing Paradise

Place where your inner being is totally at ease
Always and forever
Reaching any expectation beyond you can
Assume or imagine being in
Disbelief and in Awe sharing this experience with all your loved ones
In your life
Spending eternity with The King of Kings and being
Enveloped in his love and care...










12/21/2015 John Hamilton Acrostic Paradise Contest

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Paul Callus December 25, 2015 at 2:02 PM I like your take on the paradise theme, Michael. I had one ready to post, but this morning I changed my mind and posted a new one instead! Hope you had a lovely Christmas day ~ Regards // paul Michael Tor February 4, 2016 at 8:35 PM Thank you Paul sorry for late response.

Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2015 at 6:29 PM wait till you see MY values system. heehee. Maybe I will do fantasy romance for paradise(since I don't really get it!!)hahaha Michael Tor December 22, 2015 at 8:42 PM lol you are too funny Andrea. lol

Andrea Dietrich December 21, 2015 at 2:22 PM very nicely done. It is so cool to see different people's ideas of paradise! Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:07 PM It's nice to see peoples value system in this write Andrea. Thanks for visiting amiga.

Robert Lindley December 21, 2015 at 9:31 AM MY FRIEND, THIS IS A FINE POEM. IT EXPRESSES , HEART , INSPIRATION, LOVE, SINCERITY AND TRUTH... And proudly points to the true paradise that mankind so often rejects! A7 Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:10 PM Hi Robert, thank you so much for this generous comment. So true my friend. Blessings to you and your lovely wife. Hope you are well Robert. I will have to come and visit my friend.