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Experienced Lady

Innocence so was allured
                                             she a baby for a chocolate 
                                             captivated with the illusion
                                     thought life's it's own beautiful reason

                                       From straight to bend of back bone
                                          for charade of life no solution 
                                           carnal damage still  going on
                                        now suffering from agoraphobia

                                           Sense of cerebellum sinking
                                         no strength to go for a combat
                                      oh! her sacrificed heart is crushed
                                         cries again but with only vision

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/12/2013 9:33:00 PM

Hi bl, I am sad for your friend, she is missing out on so much and those who wish to spend time with her miss out as well. Was she abused??

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/14/2013 11:57:00 AM

Too some extent she is surely abused, my friend. Thanks for your visit to my page and for your comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 1:18:00 PM

love the insights and thoughts of this poem , and EXPERIENCED LADY'... one should always move on. the 4th line is a very special. thank you for sharing... Linda

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/12/2013 9:50:00 AM

Hi! my friend, giving thanks to you a lot for inspiring me. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2013 8:50:00 AM

descriptive and well quilled, bl.. we do all suffer from anxiety attacks and your piece delivers... well done!..:) huggs

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/11/2013 10:29:00 AM

Thanks for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/6/2013 2:06:00 PM

Hi Bi; This a sad poem. It is never good to suffer from any kind of phobia. Me I don't like to be in any closed up places, or narrow places. great write. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/8/2013 12:17:00 PM

A lot of thanks to you. Sorry for giving thanks lately. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2013 12:23:00 AM

gosh, this poor lady. Who is she, BL? I feel like she is someone special to you?

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/4/2013 12:37:00 PM

She is not special to me but for one of my friends. My friend, wish you happy friendship Day. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2013 3:22:00 PM

This person must be a very interesting person who is trapped by her phobia..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/3/2013 6:00:00 PM

Thanks a lot, my sweet friend. Always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2013 1:45:00 PM

i iike this, bl... it is so open to many interpretations... enjoyed the whole piece on atonement...well done! :) huggs

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/3/2013 2:28:00 PM

A sweet thanks to you for your sweet comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/3/2013 1:15:00 PM

- A very talented poem bl !! - Wishing you a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/3/2013 1:22:00 PM

Thanks my friend for visiting my page and for your inspiration. Loved always, bl

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/2/2013 2:56:00 PM

There are SO many underlying messages here. Wisdom is an unwrapped gift after you discover the mistakes you've made and corrected them. Excellent piece!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/3/2013 12:57:00 PM

Thanks a lot my friend. Loved always..... Loved always, bl