Expediency

Elaborate the plan Enticing by pretence Exclusive in deceit Extols hypocrisy. Each step has been rehearsed Except for masquerade Excessively disguised. -------------------------------- Author: Paul Callus ~ 27 April 2014 Contest: Let’s Pleiades Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Placing: 7th

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Gerald Kithinji

Date: 5/9/2014 10:41:00 AM

The master of E

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2014 11:37:00 AM

Thank you sir! // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2014 11:50:00 AM

Hi Paul, excellent win.., Congrats on your poem :) Linda

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2014 12:36:00 PM

Thank you Linda! I love it when you stop by...even if just for a quick peep :) // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 5/1/2014 3:02:00 PM

Stooping back with a well deserved congratutations...Tim

Paul Callus
Date: 5/1/2014 3:12:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Of course congrats are due to you, too. cu // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 5/1/2014 10:56:00 AM

Lovely poem Paul well deserved win. jan x

Paul Callus
Date: 5/1/2014 11:16:00 AM

Thank you Jan; all the winning entries were worthy ones (including yours:)). /x/ paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/1/2014 5:46:00 AM

in fine form and mood, paul.. best cheers in your win in my contest.. huggs!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/1/2014 6:05:00 AM

Thank you Nette; enjoyed the use of this form (1st time for me); you had a hard job re placings....the competition has been a healthy one of high standards. cu // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/30/2014 10:33:00 PM

Wonderful write Paul ! yes this one doesnt need a rehearsal,,its a reflex action sometimes to escape hurt ,, congrats on fine win !

Paul Callus
Date: 5/1/2014 4:28:00 AM

Good day Dr Upma; thank you for another welcome visit accompanied by your lovely comments! cu // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/30/2014 11:35:00 AM

Dear Paul, Although this is a new form for me, I love the way you used it to describe deception. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 4/30/2014 4:00:00 PM

Hi Carolyn! This is the first time that I used this form; I used it again yesterday in my latest poem FGM. I find that it can be quite effective. (This contest still has to be judged.) txs for another welcome visit :) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2014 6:39:00 PM

Paul, you are so lucky if all your cats have been lovely and cuddly. I think out of about twelve cats we have had in 40 years, only three or four have been truly cuddly to the point that you could pet them a long time and they would just sit there loving it. Callie lived the longest and was the only one to die with us. A few others had really bad potty habits and we got rid of them before they could do more harm to our carpets!!! I think you have had better luck with cats than we ever did!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/29/2014 6:01:00 AM

Hi Andrea! We never keep our cats inside (except at night); luckily we have a big field and garden where they live in 'liberty', but they do not wander off. I say they are cuddly...although some of them act that way under their own conditions! No potty problems, but that's understandable in our case!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2014 4:44:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..I like the alliteration used in your work..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2014 5:14:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by Sara...love your comments:) // paul

Sam Toil

Date: 4/28/2014 6:27:00 AM

I see, Paul, that you have experience with the world of business. Is not everything (including Truth) a slave to closing-the-deal? A succinct, well written exposition. Peace...Sam

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2014 8:10:00 AM

Hi Sam, unfortunately in this world nothing is plain-sailing, straight forward; wheeling and dealing, back-stabbing, etc take place all the time. // txs for stopping by. // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 4/28/2014 4:19:00 AM

Eloquently executed....

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2014 4:32:00 AM

Thank you Tim...for both the visit and comment. cu // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2014 7:42:00 PM

That is really strong: extols hypocrisy. This is a very thinking one, Paul!!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2014 3:17:00 AM

Thank you Andrea; it did need some thinking....there were a few angles from which to tackle it; in the end I opted for this one. Have a nice week:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/27/2014 4:23:00 PM

"enticing by pretense.. hmmn.." this all through in Masquerade.. detailed prose... :D God bless always.. :), olive eloisa so sleepy but better now.. :D

Paul Callus
Date: 4/27/2014 4:38:00 PM

Thank you for visiting and commenting Olive_eloi :) bless you; hope you have a nice sleep:) // paul