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Expectations Under Wraps on Christmas Eve

Kimo, haiku, couplet Expectations Under Wraps on Christmas Eve wild hammering and disciplined screwing of elves in Santa’s workshop - will toys be fiddled with… an exotic sleigh and a ho ho ho drives hard through the dark of night unlike the North Pole the blinking lights sleep as Santa rides down in chimney sweep

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Silent One

Date: 12/21/2023 12:42:00 PM

Three excellent choices for this contest.. all the best Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2023 3:07:00 PM

Thank you so much! The muse a-mus-ing me ;) God bless you, dear one.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/20/2023 8:28:00 PM

Brought back memories of my three daughters on Christmas morning with squeals of delight and wrapping paper everywhere. Many a time I found a present amongst the scrap paper lol. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2023 3:08:00 PM

LOL! Thanks for sharing your memory! Seems so long ago that I watched my kids unwrapping toys. Merry Christmas!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/20/2023 7:53:00 PM

Oh this is such a creative poem dear Kim, beautifully done for the contest with a wonderful combination of kimo, haiku and couplet.. I love the imageries you've created and this conveys the arrival of light amidst darkness in so many different ways. You've so gorgeously crafted these lines, a pleasure reading this.. Wow :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2023 3:08:00 PM

I so appreciate your comment! Blessings!

Paige Hind

Date: 12/20/2023 5:23:00 PM

Loved this! The images speak for themselves, like multiple meanings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2023 5:26:00 PM

Thanks, Paige!