Expectation

dark'n thick clouds hanging
deceiving by the report
down in misery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 11:40 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Noriko. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 10:36 AM
very lovely alliteration in the haiku with good images, Noriko
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