Expect Sweet Sunshine

small flower looks up
to the sky convinced she may
expect sweet sunshine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Smith Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 11:49 AM
Thanks! Keep poem-ing! :)
Vellinga Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 11:01 PM
You as well
Smith Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Sweet sunshine looks down/ To the small flower, convinced/ It will smile back! :D
Wood Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 9:54 AM
Now this is fun! Do you two do this often? Echoing another's poem with a mirrored twist. I think the Japanese masters used to do this. I enjoyed both, thank you.
Vellinga Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 1:42 AM
Nice!!!
Greener Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Very beautiful indeed, enjoy the beauty of life.
Vellinga Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 9:28 AM
I couldn’t agree more thank you
Rose  Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 5:06 AM
And I pray that she finds the sunshine so she can grow into a beautiful flower, Have a great day dear Janny xo
Vellinga Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 9:59 AM
She will, thank you and a great day to you as well
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