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Exit the Autumnal Equinox

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Exit the Autumnal Equinox 
David J Walker

Decades of decay line the lanes of
Seasonal death scenes descending to
Another frozen winter

The master of the Autumnal Equinox 
dispenses its mercies 
At best sparingly 

Transitions subtle 
Under the blended reflection 
of a cooler sun

Yellow as yarrow 
Rusted blood red orange 
Pinks disappear on 
The western horizon 

Dark mountains lined 
With Aspin and Pine 
Only get in the way 

Of Autumn leaving and
Winters grand entrance 
In a distant storm 

Formed 
in ice and snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 11/24/2021 2:19:00 AM
Superb observation. So enjoyable to read again.
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David Walker
Date: 11/24/2021 5:14:00 AM
Andrew, Thank you. I love fall.
Date: 11/23/2021 11:59:00 AM
Hello David Walker, I love the scene of this poem. I can just picture it. As I read these words. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/24/2021 12:02:00 PM
Hello David, you are welcome. Summer is my favourite season then Fall then Spring. I am not a fan of winter. Happy Thanksgiving Day to you my friend.
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David Walker
Date: 11/24/2021 6:56:00 AM
Hi Darlene, Nice to hear from you again. Thank you. Fall is my favorite season to write about

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