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Existentiality the Open Form

Self analysis 
       & motive
imultiple functions
 erupt 

 tradition 
   chiselled
                in reality
distorted 
   by self perception 

folds of skin
    furrowed brows 
surround
    the anatomy of eyes

  indentations &
       peculiarities 
crystallised forever 
     by self-awareness
 in the existential

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
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John Lawless

Date: 12/15/2022 6:41:00 AM

very interesting form Brian. The note reads like a legal brief so it may take me a while to figure it out.