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Existential Thoughts

amazement
     appears
     to outlive
the commonplace
     to exhaust
     in the pre-shock
of existence:
yes,a forfeit
      to float
      unchanged,
discreet
&
sincere
if
    distilled
becomes
a needless
scarcity
'til
swamped again
by
excess

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/20/2018 2:29:00 PM
Hello Brian, we nver know from one point to another how our thoughts will go. Have a nice day my friend..
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/20/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Darlene
Date: 11/18/2018 11:44:00 AM
Awesome poem, Brian.
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/18/2018 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Line and for your ongoing support for my contests

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