Existences

Every little simple minute 
Seems so much more.
As though it has designs
Within it present from before
When we were tiny dots our
Selves, BEARLY in existence
Favored on the wish list.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Foss Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 11:21 PM
This is very deep and opens up the reader's eyes to the fact that our lives are deeper than we think, an that there is a design and meaning to it, even if we can see it. Thank you for writing this!
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April 25, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Thank You for paying ATTENTION to detail. DYLAN.
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