Existence

Spark of the Divine
Fighting his imperfection,
Mediocrity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Roper Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Halliday Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 7:11 PM
Thanks Eve
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 8:44 AM
One of my favorites, congratulations.
Halliday Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Thanks Richard
A. Sharma Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Great philosophical write Mark! Congrats on ur win!
Halliday Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Congrats back at you.
Merryman Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 8:57 PM
Great senryu, Mark! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Halliday Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Thanks Kim
A  Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:49 PM
MARK, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
Halliday Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Thanks Skat
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July 3, 2015 at 6:26 PM
Mark, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
Halliday Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Thanks Linda
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 4:56 PM
We are only human. I really like this one. Congrats on your win.
Halliday Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 10:28 AM
Thanks Andrea. Only human, but we have a divine potential.
Onclaud Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 2:06 PM
thought provoking, mark... all the best!.. huggs
Halliday Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 6:24 PM
There's a spark of the divine in everyone. The hard part is to feed it rather than extinguish it. Thanks for commenting Nette.
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2015 at 4:05 PM
very clever and a bit profound!
Halliday Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 6:25 PM
There's a spark of the divine in everyone. The hard part is to feed it rather than extinguish it. Thanks for commenting Andrea.
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