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Existence

Spark of the Divine Fighting his imperfection, Mediocrity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/4/2015 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/4/2015 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 7/4/2015 8:44:00 AM
One of my favorites, congratulations.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/4/2015 10:25:00 AM
Thanks Richard
Date: 7/3/2015 10:28:00 PM
Great philosophical write Mark! Congrats on ur win!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/4/2015 10:25:00 AM
Congrats back at you.
Date: 7/3/2015 8:57:00 PM
Great senryu, Mark! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/4/2015 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Kim
Date: 7/3/2015 6:49:00 PM
MARK, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/4/2015 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Skat
Date: 7/3/2015 6:26:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/4/2015 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 7/3/2015 4:56:00 PM
We are only human. I really like this one. Congrats on your win.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/4/2015 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. Only human, but we have a divine potential.
Date: 6/23/2015 2:06:00 PM
thought provoking, mark... all the best!.. huggs
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/23/2015 6:24:00 PM
There's a spark of the divine in everyone. The hard part is to feed it rather than extinguish it. Thanks for commenting Nette.
Date: 6/22/2015 4:05:00 PM
very clever and a bit profound!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/23/2015 6:25:00 PM
There's a spark of the divine in everyone. The hard part is to feed it rather than extinguish it. Thanks for commenting Andrea.

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