Exiled

Were not exiled from your birthplace my soul you would not have to endure life's pains!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
       20 March 2017

* Dedicated to a dear friend going through difficult times.

heavenlifepainmonoku

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Probir Gupta

March 20, 2017 at 7:44 AM

And what about the gains therefrom that have been sublimating in your inimitable Haiku and monoku ! ... may be your rooftop flowers too are envious of them ... shining gem ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 20, 2017 at 8:34 AM

I stand by my Haiku and Monoku dear, Probir! This life has many things to offer but in the degree we do not accept it we suffer! This Monoku is for our friends who find it too hard to accept life therefore I say to them: If you came here then you have to stay and accept life that you have chosen stoically! Thank you my friend!