Exiled

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SUFFERING

FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 20 MARCH, 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

Were not exiled from your birthplace my soul you would not have to endure life's pains! © Demetrios Trifiatis 20 March 2017 * Dedicated to a dear friend going through difficult times.

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Probir Gupta

Date: 3/20/2017 7:44:00 AM

And what about the gains therefrom that have been sublimating in your inimitable Haiku and monoku ! ... may be your rooftop flowers too are envious of them ... shining gem ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/20/2017 8:34:00 AM

I stand by my Haiku and Monoku dear, Probir! This life has many things to offer but in the degree we do not accept it we suffer! This Monoku is for our friends who find it too hard to accept life therefore I say to them: If you came here then you have to stay and accept life that you have chosen stoically! Thank you my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2017 3:18:00 AM

- Life is not a bed of roses ... we learn from adversity - Great written - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/20/2017 8:37:00 AM

So true my friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting! Hugs!